How to start an introduction descriptive essay on my bedroom? ????
my room : purple walls
white carpet
you can see my whole neighborhood from my windows
silver full set bed
mirrors
heres my introduction :
The walls are a beautiful grape with a fuzzy white carpet that tickles my feet. Matching the colors, my white mattress sits in a silver frame and bounces when I lay on it. From it, I can see the world below outside my window. I can see the roofs become grayer as the sun goes down and the lights come on in apartments and houses while the stores and offices go dark. The sun sets in a purple sky, almost the same color as my walls, and for a while my worlds of home and space merge in deep color. My room is very important to me for variety of reasons,
what reasons should i put in my thesis?? i need outward and inward description in my room and does it have at least some of the 5 senses ??
7 Answers
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Too much I see/sight words. What do you hear (dogs, neighbors, clattering dishes) and smell and perhaps you can chew gum or eat dinner there to describe taste.
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As I sit bundled up in a warm, brown, comfy hoodie and a big, pink blanket, I say to myself, “Where is my favourite place to be?” Well that’s easy, it’s here in my room. My room is the one place I can be me. I can be perfectly content by myself in this room, or happily laying watching TV with my boyfriend. When sitting on my pink, candy cane, stripped bed with my lime green, fluffy to the touch blanket and hot pink and black pillows, I look around my room and I notice that all my walls are different yet they all tie perfectly together.
a short description
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Your reasons could be that your room is a place where you like to think about your most private thoughts and where you sleep. If you use your room for any other reason (Example for studying) I think you should include that.
The more sensory senses you have, the better. For sight, I would suggest describing the actual shape of the room, the space,etc. The furniture should also be included in the description. For touch, you can say how comfortable your bed/carpet is and you can say how smooth/rough your furniture feels. For smell, you can say that you can "smell the food which is being prepared in the kitchen" or even something outside. For hearing, you can say "Whenever I go into my room, I can hear an ant walk" or "Whenever I go into my room, I can hear my neighbors talking outside." Just be creative and let your observations flow onto the paper.
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You can see the whole neighborhood from my window. I can see the roofs become grayer as the sun goes down and the lights come on in apartments and houses while the stores and offices go dark. The sun sets in a purple sky, almost the same colour as my walls, and for a while my worlds of home and space merge in deep colour. Actually, an inventory of all the stuff in your room will bore your teacher rigid. Apply your imagination to things, the white carpet foaming like the sea around your feet, streams of silver running round your bed like the moonlit water round a boat. OK, I'm getting a bit too fanciful here, but you get the general idea. Be brave!
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